Authors, Editors and Reviewers on the Art of Reviewing, Part 1

Last term, my History of Publishing class talked about the gatekeeper role of publishers and how they select and develop books, ideas and authors. As you might expect, we noted that as large publishers consolidated, they’ve invested less in authors and ideas. That disinvestment (plus changing economic conditions and technology) has opened the doors for small independent publishers who are more nimble and risk-tolerant.

What we didn’t quite get to this year is the parallel between the gatekeeping role of publishers and the gatekeeping role of reviewers: how do we (book-buyers and library-users) decide what to read? Do we follow a favorite author? Take the advice of a book group, friends or spouse? Follow Goodreads, the New York Times Book Review or the New York Review of Books? Read the Amazon reviews? Get hooked by book advertisements in mass or social media?

They’re all imperfect. Print reviews are constrained by word and page limits, reader-interest and inertia. Many on-line reviews are susceptible to five-star friends and family or one-star competitors. Amateur reviewers can be incisive and informed, or they can be raving fanboys or snarks. (Or worse.Take a look at how some ideologues anonymously one-starred Brian Griffith’s Correcting Jesus on Barnes and Noble’s lax online site.) Even professional reviewers can embarrassingly misread books (e.g., Janet Maslin, reviewing Patrick Somerville’s This Bright River, misidentified a main character in a way that undercut her conclusions).

New York Times critic-at-large (and former Ashlander) Sam Anderson, reminds us that reviewers (he calls them critics) “can no longer take readers’ interest for granted” but must write about fundamental questions “with more energy, more art, more conviction, more excitement and a deeper sense of personal investment.” And Jonathan Landman, the Times culture editor says that “A reader should walk away with a feeling of having learned something; maybe some unfamiliar facts about a work and its creator; maybe some historical or philosophical background; perhaps something about the art form itself.”

What makes a good book review? What should a book reviewer do (and not do)? What are the obligations of reviewers? I asked some writers, editors, and reviewers this, and here’s what I heard.

From Tod Davies, editor and publisher at Exterminating Angel Press

    Really, the most important thing is that the reviewer should actually have read the book. You would be astonished, or maybe not, to know how many people give opinions, often quite strong ones, based on what they think the book is or should be about, rather than what it is. But of course this is a problem in human interaction generally.

From Jeff Baker, Book Review Editor for the Oregonian

    What I always tell prospective reviewers is that a good review should do three things: say what the book is about, whether the reviewer liked it or not, and why. Not as easy as it looks in 500 words. Beyond that, a good review should both pique an interest in reading the book and provide enough information and context to know what it’s about without reading it. Again, not as easy as it seems.

From Adam Woog, author and crime and mystery reviewer for The Seattle Times.

    One thing that really burns me: finishing a review and knowing more about the reviewer’s own thoughts than about the book itself. There’s a place for a personal essay inspired by a book, but not when it’s disguised as a review telling me if the book would interest me.

    Maybe related to that is when a reviewer tries to impress me with his/her erudition and overall sense of superior intellect. I know a lot of big words, but I spend most of my time writing books for middle-school students and a newspaper — I’m very conscious of the need to write cleanly and concisely for an audience that may not know all of those big words. It’s satisfying to read a review that gets a complex book’s point across in an unadorned style (without dumbing it down).

From freelance reviewer Audrey Homan:

    Impartiality plus critical thought equals a win. If all you post is positive reviews — and indeed some blogs state up front that all they do is positive reviews — then I’m just gonna assume you’re shilling for the man and move on. I want reviews that explain what worked and didn’t work, along with examples.

    If the writing’s flat and lifeless, include a passage you think exemplifies that. If you didn’t care if the whole cast of characters got hit by a train, tell me what would’ve made you pull their helpless persons off the tracks. Did the man with the gun ever make it into the plot? Was he late? Was the gun in a vase of azaleas? It’s just as important to show your work in a book review as a mathematical proof.

From Brian Griffith, author of A Galaxy of Immortal Women: The Yin Side of Chinese Civilization and Correcting Jesus. Correcting Jesus: 2000 Years of Changing the Story, The Gardens of Their Dreams: Desertification and Culture in World History, and Different Visions of Love: Partnership and Dominator Values in Christian History.

    I think book reviews should be short–maybe three to six lines. I don’t think people want to read essays while shopping for books. The point should be what’s important about the book, or what contribution it makes. If it doesn’t make a significant contribution, I wouldn’t bother saying so. When I write reviews, I’m trying to promote significant ideas while promoting myself at the same time. I make a hopefully astute observation about the book, and sign it.

Stay tuned for more…

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Non-Words for August

Here are the Non-Words for August. I’ve made it through month eight, which included at the beginning a vacation to the Idaho desert and at the end five days with a fever.

Thanks to Jennifer Marcellus, Rebecca Ann Bartlett, Lesley Hopper, Charlotte Hadella, William della Santina, Cara Ungar, and Amy Miller for their non-words.

    glind, v. to simultaneously grind and glide. 1 Aug

    twoops, n. a pre-programmed tweet that suddenly becomes inappropriate in the context of that day’s news. 2 Aug

    biofullia, v. to have had too much of the great outdoors. 3 Aug

    eluct, v. to avoid (also, eluctable, adj., able to be avoided or resisted-backformations of ineluctable). 4 Aug

    undermood, n. insufficient pride in one’s accomplishments (cf. Old Eng. “overmod,” and thanks to Jennifer Marcellus). 5 Aug

    cudgole, v. to persuade someone to move along by displaying a nightstick but not actually using it. 6 Aug

    dwin, n. the flat monotone of one who knows many languages. 7 Aug

    exvestigate, v. to outsource one’s research, inquiry or investigation to consultants. 8 Aug

    wretchword, n. TV character’s catchphrase used with the intent of producing annoyance (eg, Rob Lowe’s “literally”). 9 Aug

    widle, v. to move with one’s widest part side first in a blustery advance (“He widled up to the woman at the bar.”) 10 Aug

    birch, v. to walk by someone and pretend you don’t see him/her (thanks, Rebecca Ann Bartlett). 11 Aug

    Augdust n. superheated, dry summer weather carrying dirt and debris on hot winds. 12 Aug

    caren’tless adj. to do something in an “I couldn’t care less” manner. 13 Aug

    vitup n. (pronounced “vit-TOOP”) prolonged verbal abuse or severe censure (clipping of vituperate). 14 Aug

    dogmanic, adj. to willingly have your life taken over by a dog’s needs (thanks Lesley Hopper). 15 Aug

    cananity, n. to treat dogs better than people [from inane plus canine, thanks to Charlotte Hadella]. 16 Aug

    huscular adj. of a boy, husky evolving to muscular; of a man, muscular devolving to husky [tks William della Santina] 17 Aug

    rainmanliness n. the demonstration of savant-like abilities (overheard from Cara Ungar on Facebook). 18 Aug

    ekleptic, adj. to compulsively steal ideas and opinions from a wide variety of sources. 19 Aug

    fanupsmanship n. to outfan others with arcane knowledge of some sport, pastime or popular genre. 20 Aug

    ideoligarch, n. one who must have his or her ideas validated. 21 Aug

    terroneous adj. mistaken for a terrorist, or to mistakenly terrorize. 22 Aug

    debonoir, adj. displaying the charm and smarm of a 1940s movie villain. 23 Aug

    hakkle, noun or verb, the ability of most pets and some people to feel a command before it is made. 24 Aug

    schlubeezer n. [faux Yiddish] someone whom retirement does no good. 25 Aug

    hwin, n. the sound of fingers on whiskers. 26 Aug

    foreforgive, v. to anticipate that someone is going to do something wrong and forgive them in advance. 27 Aug

    confligate, adj. to be excessively thrifty or cheap; or to hoard money. 28 Aug

    autocowreck, n. a linguistic infelicity caused by an aggressive autocorrect feature. 29 Aug

    polyphones, n. words (like “economics” or “either”) that have more than one acceptable pronunciation. 30 Aug

    febreesia, n. a sweet scent that you first think is fresh flowers, then realize is air freshener. Thanks to Amy Miller. 31 Aug

Coming soon on Literary Ashland: Authors, Editors and Reviewers on Book Reviewing and An Interview with Kristy Athens.

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Double the Evil–Chelsea Cain and James Lee Burke

After my vacation, I settled down to 900 pages of stay-up-late pure evil with James Lee Burke’s Creole Belle and Chelsea Cain’s Kill You Twice. Thrills and suspense right up until the end.

I’ve said it before: nobody quite writes evil like James Lee Burke. But Chelsea Cain is right up there. The one-two punch and the two Gretchens (Cain’s Gretchen Lowell and Burke’s Gretchen Horowitz, whose backstories in some ways parallel)—got me thinking about how differently Burke and Cain treat evil.

For Chelsea Cain, it’s psychological. Her bad actors are psychopaths addicted to grisly murder, and their evil takes over the emotional lives of the ordinary people she comes in contact with—the cops, journalists, and bystanders. For Burke, evil is sociopathy, both individual and collective. It’s driven by greed and moral weakness and preys on envy. The psychopaths in Burke’s novels find the social evil but don’t create it. The psychopathy is secondary, though there are flamethrowers, iron maidens, and more killing than in Cain’s novel.

What’s the response to evil? Both Dave Robicheaux and Archie Sheridan are moralists—they want to bring people to justice not just put them down, and they are continually having to decide how far they are willing to go. They are damaged characters. Evil has scarred both of them and how they respond driven the two series forward.

It seems to me Robicheaux to mind his own business but confront evil when it comes to them. He’s unable to walk away but also ultimately unable to change society Archie Sheridan tries to distances himself from his ex-lover/ex-torturer but circumstances conspire to bring them back together. Archie is Icarus to Robicheaux’s Sisyphus. One can’t stay away from evil; the other is constantly finding it because it’s everywhere.

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An Interview with Clive Rosengren

Clive Rosengren has been an actor for the better part of the past forty years, eighteen of them pounding the same streets as private eye Eddie Collins does in his novel Murder Unscripted. Clive’s movie credits include Ed Wood, Soapdish and Bugsy. Among his television credits are Seinfeld and Cheers, where he played the only person to throw Sam Malone out of his own bar.

He currently lives in Ashland, Oregon, amidst an extensive movie and crime fiction library. Murder Unscripted is his debut novel.

EB: You spent much of your career as an actor. How did you make the transition from actor to writer? How is writing like acting?

CR: When I was still living in LA, an actor friend and myself joined an ongoing screenwriting workshop, out of which ultimately came Murder Unscripted. Acting is essentially an art form that relies on “community”–other actors, writers, directors, etc., while writing is primarily a solitary discipline. But since I rely on reading my work aloud to determine whether or not it sounds right, I suspect there is some sort of “performance” basis to it.

EB: Where did you get the idea for Murder Unscripted? Is it based on a true story?

CR: As I mentioned, Murder Unscripted came out a screenwriting workshop. I think somewhere way back in the development process, I had an idea of a serial killer committing murders following the examples of Shakespeare’s great tragedies. Obviously, the plot veered off from that, but back there somewhere was that germ of an idea. The plot, to my knowledge, is not based on a true story.

EB: Your character Eddie Collins is an actor/private eye. I guess many actors have other jobs. Are there some who are private eyes?

CR: When I was still making the audition rounds in Los Angeles, I seem to remember encountering an actor who worked as a private eye. I don’t know that the PI sideline is that prevalent, but certainly seems to me a worthy “day job,” since the hours are pretty flexible, leaving one open to still pursuing the acting bug.

EB: What is your writing life like? Do you work with a writing group? Slave away alone? Write all day? Do you wear the porkpie hat when you write?

CR: I do work with a writing group, a group of four other writers that is informally dubbed “Monday Mayhem.” I don’t write all day; in fact, my writing habits leave a lot to be desired. I don’t wear the porkpie hat when writing, but now that you mention it, perhaps the Muse can be found underneath it. I shall have to try that!

EB: Do you have a next project? I know that you’ve also been involved in writing screenplays.

CR: I’m at work on a second Eddie Collins story, tentatively titled Red Desert. I have also signed a contract to do the narration for Murder Unscripted for Blackstone Audio. It is scheduled to be released in January of 2013.

EB: I know that you have an extensive collection of movies and crime fiction. What are some of your favorites? What do your read?

CR: My hands-down favorite film is Chinatown, closely followed by L.A. Confidential. The Godfather trilogy is high on my list, along with almost anything starring Meryl Streep, who I believe is the finest screen actress of her generation, maybe even of any generation. I have a handful of crime writers I read religiously: Michael Connelly, Robert Crais, James Lee Burke, Nevada Barr, Craig Johnson, T. Jefferson Parker, John Sandford, and the list goes on.

EB: Any advice for first time authors out there? What have you learned?

CR: Read voraciously, not necessarily in the particular genre you wish to dwell. Make the best effort you can to write every day, anything, even it it’s in your journal. I have learned that persistence pays off, that you must trust your instincts, and write what you want to write, not just because some form or genre is “hot.” Polonius hit the nail on the head when he said, “…to thine ownself be true.”

EB: Thanks for talking with me.

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